Paragraph One: Thesis and Opening
-Thesis
*McCandless was justified in the pain he brought to family and friends because:
-He never intended to hurt them, (he was planning on coming home)
-He figured they wouldn't miss him or feel attachment, (check page)
-He helped them live their lives to the fullest, (Ron)
Paragraph Two: Point One
-He figured they wouldn't miss him
*Check page number
-He didn't miss them, (makes him a bit wrong)
-Bad relationship, (father in particular)
Paragraph Three: Point Two
-His story influenced people to live life to the fullest
*Ron left his house and started to branch out
*Author travelled all around Alaska
Paragraph Four: Point Three, Final Point?
-He never intended on hurting them
*Cut himself off on purpose, less personal
*Intended on going home
Paragraph Five: Closing
-Never had the intention of hurting them, so he wasn't wrong
-Never considered other people's feelings, so he was slightly wrong
-Overall, I believe that he was in the right: Explain
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