Tuesday, December 8, 2009

Into the Wild: Outline

Question number two: Was McCandless justified in the pain he brought to family and friends in choosing his own solitary course in life? Why or why not?


Paragraph One: Thesis and Opening

-Thesis
*McCandless was justified in the pain he brought to family and friends because:

-He never intended to hurt them, (he was planning on coming home)
-He figured they wouldn't miss him or feel attachment, (check page)
-He helped them live their lives to the fullest, (Ron)


Paragraph Two: Point One

-He figured they wouldn't miss him
*Check page number

-He didn't miss them, (makes him a bit wrong)
-Bad relationship, (father in particular)


Paragraph Three: Point Two

-His story influenced people to live life to the fullest
*Ron left his house and started to branch out
*Author travelled all around Alaska


Paragraph Four: Point Three, Final Point?

-He never intended on hurting them
*Cut himself off on purpose, less personal
*Intended on going home


Paragraph Five: Closing

-Never had the intention of hurting them, so he wasn't wrong
-Never considered other people's feelings, so he was slightly wrong
-Overall, I believe that he was in the right: Explain

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