Paragraph One: Thesis and Opening
 -Thesis
  *McCandless was justified in the pain he brought to family and friends because:
 -He never intended to hurt them, (he was planning on coming home)
 -He figured they wouldn't miss him or feel attachment, (check page)
 -He helped them live their lives to the fullest, (Ron)
Paragraph Two: Point One
 -He figured they wouldn't miss him
  *Check page number
 -He didn't miss them, (makes him a bit wrong)
 -Bad relationship, (father in particular)
Paragraph Three: Point Two
 -His story influenced people to live life to the fullest
  *Ron left his house and started to branch out
  *Author travelled all around Alaska
Paragraph Four: Point Three, Final Point?
 -He never intended on hurting them
  *Cut himself off on purpose, less personal
  *Intended on going home
Paragraph Five: Closing
 -Never had the intention of hurting them, so he wasn't wrong
 -Never considered other people's feelings, so he was slightly wrong
 -Overall, I believe that he was in the right: Explain
 
 
 
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